This would be awesome if you read it, please.
Sun, 08/22/2010 - 5:23am
Hey guys, would you mind reading my short story I wrote for a friend.
http://xxporcupine.tumblr.com/post/992609778/breifly-used
Please tell me what your interpretation of it or did you think it was any good.
Feedback is much appreciated.
Thanks.
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[xx] Chazz Meister!
Thu, 09/30/2010 - 9:01pm
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thank you.
haha, well thanks for reading it...
I waited a while for someone to at lease look at it.
This is much appreciated.
The story is very empathic, very real, like you can see where this can/has happened to yourself in your life, one point or another.
now i need more people to read it, haha
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[xx] Chazz Meister!
Sun, 11/14/2010 - 12:27pm
#3
i think it's fine ;)
i think it's fine ;)
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rather waste some time with you <3
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rather waste some time with you <3
i somewhat like it
it's vague a bit buut it has a lot of feelings melted into it to mend.
it's like a lyric too
think i can walk into that situation pretty well and whatnot, eh?:D